While we may never know who indeed authored the ever so memorable memo, which has cost former ambassador Husain Haqqani his day job, we do know that President Asif Zardari has been a prolific writer who has contributed several op-ed pieces to fine publications, such as the Washington Post and the New York Times.

Within days of Benazir Bhutto's tragic death, President Zardari published the first of several op-ed pieces, which have continued to appear in the international press at opportune times. Writing in the Washington Post on January 5, 2008, President Zardari called for the “enemies of democracy and tolerance” in Pakistan to be “exposed and marginalised.”

The byline clearly identifies him as the author of the article. However, given his demonstrated eloquence in English, which is reflected in his interviews, one can't help but wonder if President Zardari indeed was the author of these op-eds in the American and British newspapers.

Given the severity of challenges faced by Pakistan, it indeed appears frivolous to spend time and energy investigating the authorship of certain op-eds that identify President Zardari as the author. I will, however, argue that given the nation is fixated on the authorship of the controversial memo, this may be the only time when one could highlight issues related to plagiarism and ghostwriters in Pakistan.

What sparked my interest in these op-eds is the lack of consistency about certain facts. For instance, in the op-ed published in the Washington Post on January 5, 2008, President Zardari claims that he “spent more than 11 years in Pakistani jails.” However, writing in the same publication on September 4, 2008, President Zardari claims that he has “spent nine years in prison.” How can he be confused about the time he spent in prison? If he were the author of these op-eds he would have remembered the time he spent in prison without ever being convicted of any wrongdoing.

President Zardari is not the only head of the state who has contributed op-ed pieces to influential newspapers in England the United States. Former US President Bill Clinton and the British Prime Minister Tony Blair have also done the same. It may very well be true that Messrs Clinton and Blair received help with their drafts as well. However, given that both Clinton and Blair are native speakers of English language, graduates of reputed institutes of higher learning, and practicing lawyers in the past, one could see them being the authors of the op-ed pieces that bear their names.

President Zardari however lacks such endowments where his language proficiency, education, and past professional achievements bear no hint of the authoring abilities illustrated in the op-eds that bear his name. Conversely, one can also argue that he may have been hiding his creative writing skills all along for an opportune time later in his life.

Many to this day remember President John F. Kennedy's memorable inaugural speech in 1961 in which he famously said "ask not what your country can do for you – ask what you can do for your country." While President Kennedy uttered these words, he never wrote them. In fact, Theodore C. Sorensen (Kennedy called him his intellectual blood bank) is credited with the penning of that famous phrase.  If President Kennedy and others can use speechwriters, why can President Zardari not have ghostwriters, should he need one?

The question, however, is to determine if there exists a difference between speeches and writings.  Many would argue that retaining a speechwriter is permissible, because delivering a speech does not imply that the speaker is also the writer. However, claiming authorship of an article leaves no room for speculation.

I put this question to the New York Times Magazine writer, Randy Cohen, who writes the weekly ethicist column. According to Cohen, “to deliver a speech someone else has written does not deceive your listener. But to sign your name to a piece of writing is more than to endorse those ideas; it is to claim authorship. As far as I'm concerned, if you put your name to a piece of writing you did not actually write, that is indeed plagiarism.”

Again, I am not suggesting or implying any wrongdoing on President Zardari’s part, but instead I am addressing the larger issue of what due diligence should be expected of the newspapers that publish op-eds from heads of state.

Even in a speech one cannot repeat words of another author without attribution. The Dean of medicine at the University of Alberta, Professor Philip Baker, learnt the hard lesson recently when he, while speaking at a banquet, plagiarised a speech by Dr. Atul Gawande, who is a surgeon and writes for The New Yorker. Prof Baker realised his mistake and offered an unconditional apology for the serious lapse in judgement. He also had to step down as the Dean of medicine.


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Comments (34)

mhz
November 26, 2011 10:58 am
I have read some of his writing ,and if a 12th grade education can produce this kind of english in Pakistan then we should be at top of the list in the world for educational standards.
sja
November 25, 2011 2:03 pm
correction--- pieces of memo-- ries or memo- lies that is the artistic piece in all this story.
Naveed Malik
November 25, 2011 1:57 pm
you write TRUE .
sja
November 25, 2011 1:53 pm
Good piece of advice. Your hope is very honest but when it comes to memo they will be only pieces of memo--ries and no more memos that is the artistic piece in all this story.
Saraja Allen
November 25, 2011 10:03 am
I fully agree with you. Here Mr Haqqani is just scapegoat. The question is: Will the People of Pakistan have the courage to ask this person to step down immediately. One of the facts explained in the comments are he was never elected but selected at the first place. I highly commend the writer for this great piece of write-up
SYED
November 25, 2011 12:02 am
The saving grace about the 'memo" was that it was unsigned. Was it unsigned because no body (among the three stooges,Mansoor, Haqqani or mr Z) wanted to own it openly because of its content or because of scholorship/writing skill displayed in it ,is a moot point now. It is said that Ambassador Haqqni was confronted with passages from his book",Mosque and the Army in Pakistan", his other writings and some clauses in the Kerry-Lugar bill which remarkbly mirrored the memo language ! So a word of caution to future ghost writers cum conspirators. Buy th book ( if it is still sold ) with the title" It pays To increase Your Word power". It used to be a regular feature of the venerable ' Readers Digest".Or at least don't use the same word and sentence formulations in your overt and covert works.
Rustam Ali Khan
November 24, 2011 9:59 pm
Zardari will never face any Journalist of a reputed newspaper. He always use his spokesmen like Farhatullah Babar, Rehman Malik etc to face the media and never seen courageous enough to face the media people.
Saima
November 24, 2011 8:53 pm
Very interesting comments! very humorous! i enjoyed alot! thanks for a laugh all of those who made me laugh!
raika45
November 24, 2011 5:47 pm
How about Dawn sending one of it's columnist for a one to one with Zardari.Get hie views on current events in Pakistan and his future plans for the country.That is if he agrees and he won't have to write anything.All verbal
Muhammad Kamran
November 24, 2011 1:15 pm
And I second you. LITERATE people in PAKISTAN know WHAT IS WHAT AND HOW THINGS WORK HERE!! Marvellous peice of writing, but useless peice of crap for the BIG FISHES. Thumbs up to writer!!
sf
November 24, 2011 10:09 am
It is quite common among presidents, prime ministers, legislators and business leaders to ask their aids to write, while they provide them a general outline of what they want to say, of course again with the help of their advisors. They are too busy with their job and it takes quite an effort to write a lengthy article.
Wasim
November 24, 2011 9:56 am
People of Pakistan did not elect President Zardari, parliamentarians did.
Tahir Mahmood
November 24, 2011 9:48 am
I wouldn't be more agree with Mr Haider that Mr Zardari should address his countrymen first.It took him weeks to issue a statement on OBL killing in last May but his article on the issue is published in Washington Post after couple of days of the incident,it was all Mr Haqqani's vision working behind.
Javed
November 24, 2011 8:32 am
Mr. Zaradari's credibility is further in doubt, when he cannot even remember the name of the college he supposedly attended in the UK - much less if he even graduated with any sort of degree. Who would ever forget an important milestone in their life, such as this? Unless...?? And we all know what that means!
MIKN (usa)
November 24, 2011 7:33 am
If one believes Zardari wrote op-ed pieces in NYT & Washington Post, then I am (late)Walter Lipmann.
Nasah (USA)
November 24, 2011 4:24 am
It is high time the writer in Mr. Zardari started writing opeds in Pakistani papers. The expatriates never bother to read Mr. Zardari in Washington Post but the locals may like to read Mr. Zardari literary gems - for example - in Dawn.
F Khan
November 24, 2011 1:15 am
Good one. Agree with every word and every line of it.
Syed
November 24, 2011 12:28 am
Tarek Fatah reference in this article is interesting. I do remember the debate between Imam Shahryar Shaikh and Tarek Fatan that was held sometime in January 2011 hosted by North American Muslim Foundation (NAMF) in Canada. I hope you do know about it and also hope you know "what was the debate all about - and it was about Tarek Fatah views on Islam.
Omar Haroon
November 24, 2011 12:05 am
"what I am not willing to accept is the fact that in times of crisis he chooses to speak directly to American taxpayers rather than to the people of Pakistan" I fully agree with this statement of yours. Brilliant article overall. It conveys much of what I feel on the subject as well.
mohammed khanzada
November 23, 2011 11:56 pm
good English , will not make you superior or intelligent...
Salma
November 23, 2011 11:23 pm
"For a change, I would like President Zardari to communicate with his own people first" YES! this is where all the problems lie... why is the President shying away from the people of Pakistan who elected him.
Devendra Sharma
November 23, 2011 10:51 pm
I doubt very much that Mr. Haqqani can write this kind of memo with out the consent of President or Prime Minister's office. Suppose he did it then his bosses shuld know the kind of a person he is before assigning him for this position in D.C.
Asmat Ashai
November 23, 2011 10:29 pm
Very well written. I would like to point out that John F kennedy's very famous and often quoted ' ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country" is a direct quote from Khalil Gibran.
Sanjay Madisetti
November 23, 2011 10:28 pm
A very well written article..hope Mr.Zardari reads this piece..
Saad Athar
November 23, 2011 9:59 pm
Excellent Article - One thing is for sure if the main culprit behind the whole issue - wanders away free then for sure it will be the failure of one of the most renowned intelligence agency in the world, a disgrace to one of the armies in the world who is already struggling to save its face in the world and death of a sovereign nation which has got so many question marks around it - but if they manage to get the culprit believe nmme all the above will be exactly opposite and we can live with our heads high
MC
November 23, 2011 7:50 pm
Couldnt agree more. Thanks.
naseem
November 23, 2011 7:08 pm
Brilliant.!! We need more writers like him. Dripping with sarcasm.!!
Shahid Ashraf
November 23, 2011 5:54 pm
brilliant article. I fully endorse your suggestion at the end of the article. Good point!
Imran Abbasi
November 23, 2011 4:10 pm
A brilliant article! Fully agree that in times of crises the President should first take those under his charge into confidence and only then fret about commissioning ghost writers to reach out to the western press. Rarely has richly deserved humiliation has been meted out to Zardari with such exquisite grace.
Syed Hyder
November 23, 2011 4:00 pm
Sadly not many people know the art of positive criticism in Pakistan especially Pakistan's mainstream media, Thanks Murtaza for a very well written blog.
Jaseem Siddiqui
November 23, 2011 3:55 pm
I find it very difficult to believe that Zardari can even write a single line leave alone an articulate analysis
riz
November 23, 2011 3:48 pm
Zardari will not communicate with his own people, they already know him.
Manzoor
November 23, 2011 3:43 pm
Trust me our rule have nothing to communicate with their people. They have given them nothing but mayhem and misery. It is sad and goes against the basic principles of political party which are more committed to serve the people rather than themselves.
shams
November 23, 2011 2:26 pm
It seems that without the support of president house Hussain haqqani is unable to write memo.